This is one of my short stories from a collection I wrote a few years ago.I would appreciate some constructive criticism.
I met my husband when I was twenty one years old and it was love at first sight.Jack was my complete opposite.He was crazy about bikes,had a fondness for tribal tattoos on his arms,didnt give [...]
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40 Weeks
Posted in Books, romance, tagged babies, book, criticism, fiction, love, pregnancy, realationships, romance, story, writing on June 9, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
Hey Guys.
I usually write mystery,crime,and action.But recently I took a stab at romance and I just want some opinions.It may not be very good but what the hell I tried.So anyway have a look and please feel free to give me constructive criticism.
Thanks!
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Eyes screwed up like a baby, Cate pushed her blonde curls from her [...]
