This is one of my short stories from a collection I wrote a few years ago.I would appreciate some constructive criticism.
I met my husband when I was twenty one years old and it was love at first sight.Jack was my complete opposite.He was crazy about bikes,had a fondness for tribal tattoos on his arms,didnt give [...]
Posts Tagged ‘fiction’
40 Weeks
Posted in Books, romance, tagged babies, book, criticism, fiction, love, pregnancy, realationships, romance, story, writing on June 9, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
Hey Guys.
I usually write mystery,crime,and action.But recently I took a stab at romance and I just want some opinions.It may not be very good but what the hell I tried.So anyway have a look and please feel free to give me constructive criticism.
Thanks!
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Eyes screwed up like a baby, Cate pushed her blonde curls from her [...]
Magique Etre
Posted in Books, tagged Books, fantasy, fiction, magic, romance, thrillers on June 8, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
Hey guys!
I just thought I’d give you a little sneak preview of part of my New Book; the Magique Etre.It’s basically about this girl,her name is Savanne,and she comes from an impoverished background in Paris.Her mother abandoned her and her uncle forced her into prostitution.One night coming home from “work”,she meets Lena,who persuades her to [...]
