This is one of my short stories from a collection I wrote a few years ago.I would appreciate some constructive criticism.
I met my husband when I was twenty one years old and it was love at first sight.Jack was my complete opposite.He was crazy about bikes,had a fondness for tribal tattoos on his arms,didnt give [...]
Posts Tagged ‘love’
Why I love to write
Posted in Books, tagged Books, like, love, passions, projects, titles, writing on June 12, 2008 | 3 Comments »
I love to write,I have been writing since I was eight years old after I read To Kill A Mocking Bird, for the first time and I realised.That’s what I wanna do with my life.
I loved the way Harper Lee made an entire world out of a simple enough story.I loved the way you can [...]
40 Weeks
Posted in Books, romance, tagged babies, book, criticism, fiction, love, pregnancy, realationships, romance, story, writing on June 9, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
Hey Guys.
I usually write mystery,crime,and action.But recently I took a stab at romance and I just want some opinions.It may not be very good but what the hell I tried.So anyway have a look and please feel free to give me constructive criticism.
Thanks!
L
Eyes screwed up like a baby, Cate pushed her blonde curls from her [...]
His kiss
Posted in Poetry, tagged companionship, love, Poetry, romance on June 8, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
His hand grazes my cheek,and I get tingles down my spine with the excitement his touch brings
The whispered promises in my ear,filled with hope of a life,a family,forever with me.
The fun,the company the never ending laughs.Surely we are made for each other,two halves of the same piece.
The magic we have together,the things that cannot be [...]
Twilight
Posted in Books, reviews, tagged Books, fantasy, love, reviews, romance, thriller, vampires on June 8, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
Name; Twlight
Author; Stephaine Meyer
Publishers; Meagn Tingley
Genre(s) Young adult, Fantasy, Romance
Plots; Bella Swann moves from sunny Phoenix, Arizona to rainy Forks, Washington to live with her father, Charlie, while Bella’s mother, Renée, travels with her new husband, Phil Dwyer, who is a minor league baseball player. Even though Bella never had many friends in Phoenix, she [...]
Memories
Posted in Self Help, tagged death, grief, love, memories, sadness on June 8, 2008 | 1 Comment »
Death is inevitable,it is a solid fact,the one thing that we are always sure about from birth.Yet it is something that we spend most of our life fearing,trying to escape,avoid,delay,as long as we possibly can.Yet death isn’t always something fear.Death is a new chapter,a new place,the next step.
Recently I lost a person that was such [...]
